Hey Blu3Be4ry,
I just wanted to let you know that the VN was going good. Even though it may have its mishaps with particular plots and points, its not bad at all. Everyone is gonna have there bits and pieces that they say about your work or with any visual novel. It's their opinion and that's just that. People are gonna hate regardless what you give them or not. That's one thing that I'm learning as well is that not everyone is going to like my content and might potentially get bashed if it's too boring even if I'm trying to explain some lore or reason or if there isn't enough romance for one of my characters that particular people love. Its all about criticism, its just about how you handle it and turn it into your favor and make it potentially better. Turn the negative into positive; LAUGH!!!
I see ALOT of potential in this visual novel and it sadden me to see it be just thrown in the trash because of others. It sucks that a community can say so much shade without giving it time to evolve. Every great game starts from somewhere, not out of thin air; well maybe creatively out of our minds but still lol. I see the loving fans and see the plots and cliffhangers that this VN can make out. Its just about going though with it and having some major encouragement and/or backup. Shooot, I'd help in anyway I can if you like with ideas or editing or anything really with the VN. just msg me.
Always remember that you do have a lot of positive fans as well that enjoy your work and wish for it to prosper. Screw the haters because they're gonna do their thing. Focus on your story and how you tell it. We'll keep rooting for you!!!
MUCH HUGS,
Blackwolf007